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Myriad (Prentor Book 1) Kindle Edition

by Mona Hanna (Author) Format: Kindle Edition
3.6 3.6 out of 5 stars 35 ratings
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Kalin, tired of being put down for who he is, leaves home when he turns eighteen. Despite being a warlock, he’s denied his magic for years because his parents told him magic is evil. He just wants to start a new life and leave his past behind.

But then Kalin is approached by a group who tell him he has a rare kind of power—and the ability to stop a dark warlock from threatening the Royal family. Kalin doesn’t think he can help until one of the witches, a seer named Regina, has a vision about his future.

The truth behind his ability shocks him—and may lead to his death and the death of his new friends. With Regina's visions as his guide, will he decide the risk is worth taking?

This is a NOVELLA of approximately 27,000 words.
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Reviewed by Eduardo Aduna for Readers' Favorite
5 out of 5 stars

Set in a world where the practice of magic has been rendered a violation, Kalin, a young man trying to suppress his magical talents, runs away to find a life for himself. His journey inadvertently ends up setting him on a collision course with a mighty warlock hellbent on revenge. With the help of new-found friends, and previously untapped powers, Kalin must find a way to defeat Myriad, the last living universal.

Mona Hanna has created one of the most lovingly crafted young adult fantasy novels I have ever read. The degree of attention to detail is extraordinary. From start to finish, there are no gaps in narration, no lack of coherence and no significant deviations from the storyline. Each chapter is an example of how to write a fast-paced yet concise scene. The quality of her prose is so fluid that each scene melds with the next. Her characters are multi-faceted individuals, humans, albeit powerful, who are working through their own individual angst. I found myself rooting for Kalin, empathizing with his struggle to find his place in a world that rejects his talents. And reading about his relationship with Regina brought me back to that bursting emotion felt when one first falls in love. The conflicts, the twists and the ending may seem a bit traditional but Miss Hanna's writing manages to captivate from beginning to end. Reading the novel made me feel like a young child again, sitting around the campfire, mesmerized by an expert storyteller's talent for making words a reality. Given the strength of this first book, I expect great things from the rest of the novellas in Mona Hanna's Prentor series.

About the Author

Mona Hanna is an author of fantasy/romance books. She enjoys writing about love, magic, conflict, trials and the joy of overcoming them. Mona enjoys reading, movies, chocolate, and adores cats. She hopes to release many more fantasy books in the years to come.

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  • ASIN ‏ : ‎ B008W8P1EW
  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ (August 10, 2012)
  • Publication date ‏ : ‎ August 10, 2012
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • File size ‏ : ‎ 322 KB
  • Text-to-Speech ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Screen Reader ‏ : ‎ Supported
  • Enhanced typesetting ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • X-Ray ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Word Wise ‏ : ‎ Enabled
  • Sticky notes ‏ : ‎ On Kindle Scribe
  • Print length ‏ : ‎ 110 pages
  • Page numbers source ISBN ‏ : ‎ 1478384964
  • Customer Reviews:
    3.6 3.6 out of 5 stars 35 ratings

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sandymill
4.0 out of 5 stars A good story
Reviewed in the United States on November 4, 2023
I enjoyed this story with all the characters within. The main character was Kalin.

Kalin is eighteen and has left his family home. They were not nice parents. Kalin has special abilities that he's has been hiding away. But when a group of people that he meets at an inn want him to come with them. And join them in helping to protect the princess.

This was a fun story to read. It has action, adventure and suspense. It had a few giggles within. There were a few sad part too.

I received a complimentary copy via Netgalley. This is my honest unbiased opinions.
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Simie
3.0 out of 5 stars An Exciting Tale of Magic and of Revenge
Reviewed in the United States on January 1, 2013
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This story is starts off with a little backstory. The once evil Warlock, Myriad, is desperately trying to save his wife and unborn child from a disease. The King has the cure which he is giving to his daughter, Princess Carmel. Unfortunately, the King selfishly use up the entire cure for his daughter and thus, sets off Myriad seeking to avenge his family's death. Myriad promises to kill three people in the Castle on the anniversary of this event until the eighteenth year of Princess Carmel's birth. Then, he will kill the Royal Family in his final act of vengeance.

Eighteen years later, we meet Kalin who is trying to start a new life. However, he meets a small group of Warlocks and Witches who have been looking for him to help stop Myriad's revenge. To learn more, you must read this book! I did enjoy this book and would recommend it to anybody who likes their fantasy with a little bit of romance.
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Shirley Carter
5.0 out of 5 stars A witches heart
Reviewed in the United States on January 15, 2013
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I have always been fascinated with witches every sense I was in my teens. This book touched my heart.It was moving and touching o say the least. I loved it.
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Roy carryer
4.0 out of 5 stars A nice story.
Reviewed in the United States on August 5, 2013
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The story is everything that a story should be. It has hate, love, life and death with a twist. Enjoy.
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3.0 out of 5 stars Quite Enjoyable
Reviewed in the United States on March 8, 2013
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I thought this book was quite entertaining. I love the length- apparently novellas are perfect for me. The story was interesting and enjoyable. The characters are believable (for a fantasy) and, in the end, I wanted to read more about them, which is the ultimate goal of a series. I will be reading the second installment as well. I also loved the fact that this book was not riddled with typos and grammatical errors. That is one of my pet peeves and seemed to be becoming more common in books, but not this one!
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Hypervorean
2.0 out of 5 stars A Sadly Unimpressive Story
Reviewed in the United States on January 24, 2013
Last week I reviewed another story by this author, namely her paranormal romance High Witch. It surprised me a lot, sneaking its way up to a four star rating, a more than impressive feat for a story that belongs to a genre I don't really like.

This novella which is more in the vein of High Fantasy had all the indicators of being much more to my taste than the first one. And yet it was not. This story had much more in it than the first one. And yet my impression of it does not reflect that. This story did not touch me at all; it left me cold and uncaring. A sadly unimpressive feat for a story meant to be tragic.

I really like the idea of this story, I just don't think that it was done well enough. I loved the aspect of tragedy and yet I didn't feel it. I have been thinking about this a lot, trying to figure our what it is exactly that ruins it for me. I think in the end it is simply the depth that is lacking. I feel that everything about this story is only just brushing the surface of matters.

We get to know a bit about the sorrows of the main character and yet even that part seems a bit superficial. We see him fall in love and start a relationship that seems way too sweet and good to be real. The other characters we barely get to know, safe perhaps from Myriad whom we practically only see through the eyes of other characters.

The most intriguing character in the story was Myriad's servant, Edward, who was shrouded in mystery through most of the story. This is probably the one thing this story did have going for it.

This is the second story I read of Mona Hanna's and I have to say that her writing style is not particularly winning me over. I thought the plot here was good, but that a generic writing style dragged it down. I think a lot of the tragic things were told of rather than shown to us.

Even though I am lover of High Fantasy I do put a lot of value into stories that seem realistic. I am not saying to cut away the magic or anything, I just think it could have been done in a more believable way.

This story has some of the elements that can make a great story. If I simply brought those into the light and ignored the rest it would be quite easy for me to paint a picture of a much better story than this is. That would be cheating the facts of course. This story contains darkness and light, truth and lies, sorrow and love, betrayal and loss and revenge. It's got all of those things and yet it doesn't seem to work.

Reading this story felt a lot like using an electronic device that lacked a few of its screws, causing it to only partially function. It felt wrong and annoying. As a writer myself I kept itching to change or add things to the story so that it might reach the potential it seems to have.

It is a real possibility that being a writer makes me a harsher critic as I recognise the cheap tricks writers use and get annoyed with them. I notice the language and if it is something less than outstanding I grind my teeth in frustration. But then, a lot of people who read also write; any story wanting success has to be able to withstand the mercilessness of a fellow writer's critique.

In the end rating a book is something completely individual. Others might see the good elements and relish them. They might accept the standardised language without question. I cannot do so. I cannot ignore the deficiencies that I sense in stories like this. Therefore this will be rated among the bland and the unfullfilling. Two stars does not equal bad but rather boring and insignificant; this story adds nothing whatsoever to the genre and could as well never have been written.

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Ceejay
3.0 out of 5 stars Promising start
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on February 27, 2013
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A great start and a good story........ I just felt it had been rushed in places. Do read it, it's worth reading.
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Ottillie Grace
4.0 out of 5 stars Enjoyable
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on January 21, 2013
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It's a very short story, but a brilliant one. I wanted it to be longer, wanted to know more. Worth a read.
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Paul Adams
4.0 out of 5 stars Good read
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on February 21, 2013
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I found this an entertaining read with a good story line. I would certainly consider any further books from this author.
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